The Roaming Radrunner Vlog 18 Classy Caldecote & Fabulous Fenny (Drayton)

AndyBike

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Crit time.

Great latest vid, at least we're going somewhere. And its a good length at about 11mins.

But if i were to add anything it would be to say while piano jazz is ok, maybe a bit of commentary, then perhaps a bit of chat also.
Mind what I said earlier about having a plan, or a script. Well the same is here.
You have the route, its A-B so maybe how about as you go a bit of social chit chat. where you are, what this is, the history of that etc etc.
People like to learn something or just like to listen to people talk.

An example of this is Alexei Sayle - Yes that Alexei Sayle. 80's far left revolutionary

But these days its less hate Thatcher*, but the same chit chat. But the style of cycloblog(is that a word) is something i think you could take note of.

* Until my dying day. I might even get them to chip into my headstone - Margret Thatcher was a C***
 

thelarkbox

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@AndyBike C***s are wonderful, unlike the poisonous hag who gave away the Country's assets to spite the rest of us so she could pretend to be one of the 'ol boys' .
 
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Peran

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Crit time.

Great latest vid, at least we're going somewhere. And its a good length at about 11mins.

But if i were to add anything it would be to say while piano jazz is ok, maybe a bit of commentary, then perhaps a bit of chat also.
Mind what I said earlier about having a plan, or a script. Well the same is here.
You have the route, its A-B so maybe how about as you go a bit of social chit chat. where you are, what this is, the history of that etc etc.
People like to learn something or just like to listen to people talk.

An example of this is Alexei Sayle - Yes that Alexei Sayle. 80's far left revolutionary

But these days its less hate Thatcher*, but the same chit chat. But the style of cycloblog(is that a word) is something i think you could take note of.

* Until my dying day. I might even get them to chip into my headstone - Margret Thatcher was a C***
Hi AndyBike
Appreciate the crit, have to say I try to keep my commentary to the minimum whilst on my roams, due to the fact that I don't want my voice to be the main event, the scenery should do that. With both my intro's & Outro's, I give a brief description of where I am roaming to, with perhaps a little bit of other info, and I have a rul (generally) not to exceed 10 mins duration. Appreciate the input. Ride Rad
 

Az.

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To make those videos more attractive you would have to migrate to Australia, any other exotic place or at least go somewhere nice like Lake District. Overwise it is just super boring... but you already heard that...